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Dr. Manhattan
October 20th, 2007, 02:01 AM
Extinction.

AHCS--Animal Human Cyborg System--prototype AI units designed for the purpose of defending homes and helping with meager household duties. They are peaceful unless it or its master is threatened, and if threatened, it will non-lethally detain its attacker. They came equipped with deadly weapons in the case of extreme danger. These weapons depended upon the type that was chosen. There were animals, and less commonly, there were humans.

In the year 2071 a very powerful Cyborg was created for the sole purpose of defending one of the four wealthy families in existence. While watching over the 6 year old daughter of the family an assassin attacked. During the following fight a stray bullet from the assassin’s gun hit the young girl in the head. The family accused the Cyborg of intentionally killing the girl; it was immediately executed. All around the world people began to accuse their Cyborgs of attempting to murder, steal, and various other crimes.

By 2073, war broke out. Many of the cyborgs fled from Section 5, a police unit established after the death of the young girl two years before. They were trained to hunt and kill any and all AHCS units. Because of the AHCS' immense strength and weaponry, Section 5 officers were required to wear a full exoskeleton, protecting them from most AHCS attacks. This is where our story begins…

Requirements


Have at least 50 posts. (Machspeed is an exception)
Be mature.
Type with Semi-Proper grammar.

Format for Profiles:

Police Ranks.

Officer
Corporal
Sergeant
Lieutenant
Captain
Deputy Chief
Assistant Chief - Taken
Chief - Taken
Master Chief

Police



Gamewinners name:[b]

Character Name:

Age: (At least 21)

Appearance:

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Rank:


Weapons:

[b]Exoskeleton abilities: (Enhanced vision, strength, retractable blades etc.)

Biogrophy:



Cyborg



GW Name:

Product Number: (serves as name for the cyborgs; just make up a random number, at least 5 digits)

Codename: (name your character goes by)

Species: (Human or any kind of animal)

Weapons: (be sure to list natural weapons your species has; i.e. talon, claw, beak, etc)

Appearance:

Background:






Profiles.

Gamewinners name: Dr.Cox

Character Name: Bane Corra

Age: (At least 21) 36

Appearance: 6’ 2”, very dark skin, very deep voice. His irises are completely black, he wears a long black trench coat and according clothes over his exoskeleton. (Think Morpheus with a gotee.)

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Rank: Chief

Weapons: Dual short swords, dual .45 Caliber pistols, sniper rifle.

Exoskeleton abilities: Enhanced vision, steadier hands, powerful leg.

Biogrophy: Born to a poor family, even by this time frames opinion, he was raised to believe in the country, and believe that it would pull itself out of the poverty it sat in. As a young man he joined the countries police force. Once his training was completed he was enlisted into Section One of the police force. After twelve years he had progressed to the rank of Captain, four years later he was already the Assistant Chief. Once Section Five was formed he was asked to be the Lieutenant, which he happily accepted. Two years in he already had 12 captures, and 57 kills under his belt. The Lieutenant became the Chief. Rather than using his power to his advantage like the other section leaders, Bane still did the grunt work, and used his influence to help the people of the city.

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GW Name: Starfyre
Product Number: 12345
Codename: Leo (:-))
Species: Lion
Weapons: Claws, fangs. There are miniature flame throwers in his mouth.

Appearance: A lion. His more vital areas are covered with robotic exoskeleton. One eye is robotic, while the other is natural. His front claws are made with tungsten to insure they will not be destroyed for a long time. Much of his organic organs are gone, his brain is still intact, but his heart was replaced with on that never stopped and never tired.

Background: He was born in Kenya in a wildlife preserve, raised for the sole purpose of being the first lion in the AHCS project. It took about two months to get him right, but eventually they did. They distributed him to a very rich family for the high price of 35 million dollars and served them for a few weeks, until the war began. He fled when his masters started to attack him and has been on the run since.

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Gamewinners name: xXUnderGroundXx

Character Name: Steve Cannon (usually just goes by Cannon)

Age: 28

Appearance: 6'4", matted down black hair, brown eyes usually covered with black sunglasses. He wears a plain white wifebeater and semi-ripped, worn blue jeans over his exoskeleton. He has a grizzled appearance from years of battling with various threats.

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Rank: Assistant Chief

Weapons: Dual .45 caliber pistols, his favourite Sub-Machine Gun.

Exoskeleton abilities: Enhanced vision, enhanced strength, and the ability to withstand intense heat.

Biography: Steve Cannon basically grew up on the streets. His father left before he was born, and his mother was never really around. She was an alcoholic, so chances are if she wasn't passed out in a gutter somewhere, she was out drinking. Steve saw nowhere else to turn, but by the grace of God somehow made it through high-school. He went to university for a year but he was kicked out when they discovered he did not have enough money to pay his tuition. From here he turned to a life of crime, moving from gang to gang, but never really getting anywhere. He had pretty much hit rock bottom, until his cousin John introduced him to God. Cannon is now a devout Chistian and decided to turn over a new life about ten years ago when he joined Section One of the police force. Two years in he had surpassed everyone at his level nd reached the rank of Lieutenant. When Section Five was formed, he decided to move there to start fresh. He started as Sergeant there, due to his experience, and about three and a half years in was already at the rank of Deputy Chief. Well two more years passed and he already had 8 captures and 53 kills to his name so he was promoted to Assistant chief. That is the rank he holds today.

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GW Name: MachSpeed

Product Number: 92611
Codename: Kor

Species: Human
Weapons: Left hand is replaced by a two foot long blade, shoulders have small miniguns attached, sharp claw-like fingers serve as weapons as well.
Appearance: Both of his arms are made entirely of robotic exoskeleton. His lungs and heart are replaced by robotic organs and visible through his robotic torso and ribs. His other human organs are covered with a bulletproof metalloid sheen. His ears are cybernetic as well, giving him the ability to hear things at exceptional distances. He wears no clothing on his upper half, but wears war torn jeans on his lower body and no coverings for his robotic feet.

Background: Jakob Morgan was your typical civilian; not poor, not rich. He was the perfect example of the average joe...until the war began. A literal hell in his city, soldiers stormed the roads and ravaged it's people, destroying anything and everything in sight. Jakob feared the worst, much like the other surviving people around him, expecting such fates as death. In a fateful event, Jakob happened to be too close to an occurring explosion. The damage to his body was devastating. The burst came from a balcony overhead, the flames engulfing Jakob's entire top torso as shrapnel shredded his flesh and pierced his body, skimming vital organs and wreaking havoc to others. The searing heat of the flames burned away the skin they came in contact with an severely burnt what was not directly contacted. He lost his heart, lungs, skin, arms, right leg and foot, left foot and ears. Hope seemed lost for the man as he lied in what he thought to be his deathbed. He was taken underground to become something more...to live his life, but in a different way...he became a cyborg...

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GW Name: Scorpion.

Product Number: 66652

Codename: Scorpio

Species: Human

Weapons: Extendable hand scythe's, bionic scorpion tail

Appearance: Like this (http://www.gpara.com/special/soft/bouncer/img/pd-4.gif) guy only dark long hair, Goatee and wearing a black suit with matching fidora

Background: Scorpio had been a scientest working on a new type of cyborg when the lab was raided by protesters. They disfigured everything in their sight, but the one's who survied their torture where brutally killed in the worst way imaginable. Scorpio, to stop him from getting this grizzly fate experimanted on himself turning him into a cyborg. Now he plans to somehow help the other's even if it means killing the whole of humanity


This thread was written by "Dr.Cox" and "Starfyre"

MachSpeed
October 20th, 2007, 03:58 AM
GW Name: MachSpeed

Product Number: 92611
Codename: Kor

Species: Human
Weapons: Left hand is replaced by a two foot long blade, shoulders have small miniguns attached, sharp claw-like fingers serve as weapons as well.
Appearance: Both of his arms are made entirely of robotic exoskeleton. His lungs and heart are replaced by robotic organs and visible through his robotic torso and ribs. His other human organs are covered with a bulletproof metalloid sheen. His ears are cybernetic as well, giving him the ability to hear things at exceptional distances. He wears no clothing on his upper half, but wears war torn jeans on his lower body and no coverings for his robotic feet.

Background: Jakob Morgan was your typical civilian; not poor, not rich. He was the perfect example of the average joe...until the war began. A literal hell in his city, soldiers stormed the roads and ravaged it's people, destroying anything and everything in sight. Jakob feared the worst, much like the other surviving people around him, expecting such fates as death. In a fateful event, Jakob happened to be too close to an occurring explosion. The damage to his body was devastating. The burst came from a balcony overhead, the flames engulfing Jakob's entire top torso as shrapnel shredded his flesh and pierced his body, skimming vital organs and wreaking havoc to others. The searing heat of the flames burned away the skin they came in contact with an severely burnt what was not directly contacted. He lost his heart, lungs, skin, arms, right leg and foot, left foot and ears. Hope seemed lost for the man as he lied in what he thought to be his deathbed. He was taken underground to become something more...to live his life, but in a different way...he became a cyborg...

xXUnderGroundXx
October 20th, 2007, 08:43 AM
Gamewinners name: xXUnderGroundXx

Character Name: Steve Cannon (usually just goes by Cannon)

Age: 28

Appearance: 6'4", matted down black hair, brown eyes usually covered with black sunglasses. He wears a plain white wifebeater and semi-ripped, worn blue jeans over his exoskeleton. He has a grizzled appearance from years of battling with various threats.

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Rank: Assistant Chief

Weapons: Dual .45 caliber pistols, his favourite Sub-Machine Gun.

Exoskeleton abilities: Enhanced vision, enhanced strength, and the ability to withstand intense heat.

Biography: Steve Cannon basically grew up on the streets. His father left before he was born, and his mother was never really around. She was an alcoholic, so chances are if she wasn't passed out in a gutter somewhere, she was out drinking. Steve saw nowhere else to turn, but by the grace of God somehow made it through high-school. He went to university for a year but he was kicked out when they discovered he did not have enough money to pay his tuition. From here he turned to a life of crime, moving from gang to gang, but never really getting anywhere. He had pretty much hit rock bottom, until his cousin John introduced him to God. Cannon is now a devout Chistian and decided to turn over a new life about ten years ago when he joined Section One of the police force. Two years in he had surpassed everyone at his level nd reached the rank of Lieutenant. When Section Five was formed, he decided to move there to start fresh. He started as Sergeant there, due to his experience, and about three and a half years in was already at the rank of Deputy Chief. Well two more years passed and he already had 8 captures and 53 kills to his name so he was promoted to Assistant chief. That is the rank he holds today.

Dr. Manhattan
October 20th, 2007, 01:27 PM
Both are accepted. Either Starfyre or I will try to get an intro up soon. :^:

xXUnderGroundXx
October 23rd, 2007, 05:42 PM
Right, this place is dying. I do not want that. If you would like, I can post an intro to try to get people started.

Dr. Manhattan
October 23rd, 2007, 07:14 PM
That would be nice. I haven't had much time to write a lot, so an Intro would be nice.

xXUnderGroundXx
October 25th, 2007, 05:15 PM
You got it, expect it up soon.

The Spartan
October 25th, 2007, 05:41 PM
And as soon as you get it running I'll join.

xXUnderGroundXx
October 26th, 2007, 04:24 PM
*Steve Cannon reviewed the papers he had just recieved with a shocked expression. He read them over and over, as if repeatedly revieweing them would make them better. He took a deep breath and took a moment to compose himself then headed out the door down the hallway. He walked down the hallway, remaining cool and collected on the outside, while inside his stomcah turned and he dreaded what awaited him at the end of the hallway. Cannon powerful-looking, somewhat intimidating exterior, though he denied this many times, actually housed the gentle soul, confused, scared soul of a child abandoned. Cannon shook himself from his thoughts, as he had reached a destination. He walked through the door at the end of the hallway, and looked at his boss, who's back was to him. He gulped, knowing the chief would not be happy about this news.*

Cannon: Umm, chief?

OOC: There you go, just something small to get this thing rolling.

Dr. Manhattan
October 26th, 2007, 06:57 PM
Bane looked up at his second in command, when he had that look it was never good. A small sigh escaped his lips as he looked around the office, loose rounds and empty clips littered the floor. His file cabinets overflowed with unorganized paperwork. The current “government” had completely abandoned his section to fight the cyborgs with no funding whatsoever. How was he supposed to track down and kill these things without the proper support? And now this, whatever this was.

“Yeah, what is it?”

“We got these reports back, and it seems that a cyborg trashed a supply convoy heading for L.A.”

“Damn, now the governer is gonna start riding my ass for this too. How am I supposed to fight these things without support?”

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Short, just to keep it alive.

xXUnderGroundXx
October 27th, 2007, 02:08 PM
*Cannon actually smiled, it was not often he was able to give the chief bad and good news in the same day.*

Steve Cannon: Actually chief, we DO have funding.

*Bane Corra raised an eyebrow*

Corra: We do?

*Steve nodded, he produced another envelope and slid it across the desk to the chief.*

Cannon: It's from my uncle, he's willing to grant us five hundred thousand dollars to fight the cyborgs. It's not much, but it's the best we've got at this point.

OOC: Hope that's alright, it just kind of came to me, a "spur-of-the-moment" type thing, you know?

Dr. Manhattan
October 27th, 2007, 08:26 PM
OOC: Don't worry about it, it's totally fine. I'll try and write something pretty soon, but I'm in the middle of an RPB so that takes priority.

Joker!
October 28th, 2007, 10:27 AM
Could I join ive got my bio:

GW Name: Scorpion.

Product Number: 66652

Codename: Scorpio

Species: Human

Weapons: Extendable hand scythe's, bionic scorpion tail

Appearance: Like this (http://www.gpara.com/special/soft/bouncer/img/pd-4.gif) guy only dark long hair, Goatee and wearing a black suit with matching fidora

Background: Scorpio had been a scientest working on a new type of cyborg when the lab was raided by protesters. They disfigured everything in their sight, but the one's who survied their torture where brutally killed in the worst way imaginable. Scorpio, to stop him from getting this grizzly fate experimanted on himself turning him into a cyborg. Now he plans to somehow help the other's even if it means killing the whole of humanity

Hows that?

Dr. Manhattan
October 28th, 2007, 01:29 PM
That's fine, I'll put you up in the first post.

Joker!
October 28th, 2007, 01:57 PM
OoC: cool thanks ill ,make my intro now

IC: Gotta..Keep....Running! Scorpio thought as he ran past a small market stall, 1 police officer chasing him. Using his tail, he knocked down a pile of crates creating the perfect diversion, "Finally!" He gasped as he ran down a deserted allyway. He sprinted straight ahead until Bam! He whalloped full force into a steel door that someone had carelessly left open, He fell down dazed for a moment trying to regain his senses.

Cody.
October 28th, 2007, 10:51 PM
I'm in.

GW Name:Cody.

Product Number: 84067

Codename: Scarlet

Species: Human

Weapons: equipped with a Sub-Machine Gun and Uzi.

Appearance: Visible feature appearance is the same as a normal male, (5'11' tall, 189 lbs., short brown spiked hair, black shades. Internal muscle layer feature is plated with steel exoskeleton (entire body is metallic underneath the skin) Bones are similar to a regular human body, only replaced with steel bones, veins and organs are replaced with micro generators and wires.

Background:Scarlet was a retired SWAT team officer, a professional body builder that always desired more strength. By the year 2069, Scarlet heard about the experiments of AHCS and that they had the technology to enhance human strength. Once the projects were available for human testing, Scarlet accepted an offer to test the cyborg electronics, but was unaware of possible side-effects. After the test, Scarlet was transformed into a humanized cyborg, his inner body was completely robotic. Scarlet presumed his career as a SWAT team officer, until the year 2073 a terrible war against the AHCS cyborg electronics was at hand. Scarlet was betrayed by his SWAT team they claimed that he was fully cyborg and he had no choice, but to fight back.

MachSpeed
October 29th, 2007, 11:00 AM
Ch-CLUNK...Ch-CLUNK...Ch-CLUNK. The heavy metallic exoskeleton treaded through the suspiciously silent parking lot of a thrift store. Ch-CLUNK...Ch-CLUNK.
"Sir," The man in the suit radioed into Sector 5 subdivision B17, slight anxiety shook throughout his voice. "no sight of the suspect yet, sir."
"Dammit! Keep looking, he can't possibly be out of your sight!"
"Y-yes, sir..." he stammered.
Ch-CLUNK...Ch-CLUNK. The officer halted, scanning the perimeter of the dark lot. All of a sudden, a cyborg shot out from behind a large truck, sprinting with remarkable speed. Street lights shone off of the robotic man, reflecting off of his polished exterior. The officer raised his arm, wielding a large Biplasmic Auto Rifle and pulled the trigger. A swarm of laser shrapnel sped down the street towards the criminal, gaining on him every step he took.
"I found him! I found him sir! I found Kor!!"
"Don't just stand there firing blankly officer! Engage in pursuit, NOW!"
The man fired up his exoskeleton and began a rushed chase, bent on getting a hold of this freakish cyborg. Kor Turned around, skidding on the asphalt. At sight of the projectiles coming his way, Kor took to the ground in a fraction of a second, just enough time to narrowly dodge the deadly lasers. Looking up, he saw the large exoskeleton Sector 5 officer lunging at him. Kor Picked himself up off the ground while slicing through the man with his arm blade in one quick motion. The man collapsed, lifeless.
"Officer Norton? Norton? Respond!"
Nothing.
"Officer?! Do you read?!"
Kor began walking down the dimly lit roadway, taking no notice of the buzzing radio. This was his life, this was what it always had been since the accident. This...is what it always would be...

Joker!
November 3rd, 2007, 04:29 PM
"Oh my head.." Scorpio muttered to himself while getting kicked by pedestrians. He got up groggily as the people surronding him stepped back in terror. "I gotta stop doin that!" He said as he started to make his way to an abandond building

Dr. Manhattan
November 3rd, 2007, 05:06 PM
A smile slid over Bane’s face. This was good news. Perhaps they could hire that kid who had been applying a little while ago. Or they could get some new equipment, either way it would help a lot.

“Tell your uncle that he’s a good man, and that this money is going to help a lot.”

OOC: Just to say that this is still going. I don’t have a specific story set out yet, so if you guys want to fight or kill some people or something, by all means, do it.

Zazu
November 4th, 2007, 12:03 AM
Wow... I forgot about this and someone didn't remind me... Well, I'll see what I can do soon.

Zazu
November 6th, 2007, 12:33 AM
A low mechanical whirring and the crunching of crispy, fallen leaves filled the deathly silent air in a small forest. Artificially constructed claws stepped forward. The hybrid lion stepped into a clearing that he himself sliced through to create a small area of hiding for the accused--all cyborgs created. A leader of sorts--one looked up to anyways--Leo felt connected to most of the hybrids. His gallantry in battle kept him atop most others. What was left of his natural instincts also led him to lead.

A smaller hybrid--a bunny that looked exactly like a real bunny--hopped gracefully next to Leo, staring up at him.

"What is it Hazel?" Leo asked (the animals were given voice boxes to produce words to communicate with their masters).

"Section 5 has received a large donation of money. There's no way to know what they'll be doing with it, but it can't be good."

"Nice information. But how did you come to obtain it?"

"Humans don't know how to keep their mouths shut."

"Well, we should begin to amass our forces. Go throughout the towns and find what AHCS units you can find."

Hazel nodded and hopped off into the war-torn, desolate streets to look for astray hybrids.

Joker!
November 6th, 2007, 12:35 PM
Scorpio ran up the stairs of the abondond building realising it was a derlict factory. This could be good for a hide-out he thoguht while opening a door leading into a the old managers roome