Register here (split)

[Addicted to Oi!]

About two times too large, to be exact.

And yes, if a mod sees it, it will be taken away.

Xnick, I would say it's a lot better, though Blood Rage still seems like it has the potential for overabuse.

It's all about the use though, and that's up to the updater's discretion. I give a yes, but you'll need two votes.

[Wolfboy122]

i dont have one i dont know how, n if i get it to big i dont want to get yelled at so i dont care ~lol~ XD

[omnisaurus]

hey i updated my registering ask right now look it and tell me what i need to change

[Xinck!]

Xnick, I would say it's a lot better, though Blood Rage still seems like it has the potential for overabuse.


I've ammended it a bit, hopefully it's a little less abusive now

[Aphrodite]

http://forums.gamewinners.com/forums/showthread.php?t=545055

[omnisaurus]

ahh ok....
i changed what i could. And about the grammar im so sorry because i'm not from any english country and i never had english classes. I learned english by just associating images to words, i learned it alone, but now i know many things about this language. If you updaters want i will re-post my registering ask and change what it stills have to change... but i reached the limit of my creativity unless i create another character. I dont want to create another one so please dont be so hard with me.

[Addicted to Oi!]

Actually, because of the split, that would be preferable.

[Aura]

ahh ok....
i changed what i could. And about the grammar im so sorry because i'm not from any english country and i never had english classes. I learned english by just associating images to words, i learned it alone, but now i know many things about this language. If you updaters want i will re-post my registering ask and change what it stills have to change... but i reached the limit of my creativity unless i create another character. I dont want to create another one so please dont be so hard with me.

Just curious, but where do you come from?

[Xinck!]

ummmmm, Wing, I have changed my character and made him less god-moddy, could you possibly pass verdict?

[Aura]

Eh, besides having techs and spells that aren't going to be very useful, I accept it.

[Xinck!]

Eh, besides having techs and spells that aren't going to be very useful, I accept it.

I wasn't going for the "Make a strong character who will kill everyone" approach, I was going for the "I want an Interesting character" approach.

So since I have approval from Both Wing and Addicted to Oi! does that mean my profile can go up now?

[Dan]

Yes, you have 2 votes. You may make your profile.

[Wolfboy122]

hello i have two votes and im still waiting for wing to accept mine, sorry i just been waiting pasionitly for a while now

[Addicted to Oi!]

Patiently.

Also, I know I accepted it, but who else did?

[Aura]

I wasn't going for the "Make a strong character who will kill everyone" approach, I was going for the "I want an Interesting character" approach.

So since I have approval from Both Wing and Addicted to Oi! does that mean my profile can go up now?

It would be wise to not have spells and techs that are only damage-based. Look at Celia Malen or Soleo Raes for examples on what I mean.

[Wolfboy122]

umm i cnt remember i no i just need to wings approval now

[Aura]

Change the techs and spells. First, those have the potential for god-modding. Second, look at Celia Malen, Jarek's Profiles, or Soleo Raes for decent spell/tech ideas.

[Addicted to Oi!]

*Thank you for referencing mine*

But really, fighting techs don't have to be all damage, but striking a person's vitals really isn't something you have to exert energy for, it's just a basic slash to a different area, something achievable in an RP.

[Wolfboy122]

was he talking to me?

[omnisaurus]

Just curious, but where do you come from?
Well im from Brazil...
and i will re-post my reg ask with the new update if needed

and wing, you said "change your spells and techs", those are to me?

[Dr. Manhattan]

Omni, just a suggestion, your Signature is still to long, My suggestion to you is that you go here (click me) (http://forums.gamewinners.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?f=754) and ask them to resize the image so that you can also have one line of text, in the meantime you should take it out of your sig so you don't lose it.

[omnisaurus]

ammm....
ok

[Cody.]

All of the Rp's going on here in Illuyad look fun and interesting, I suppose I could start of a profile and such. So, what do I do to become registered?

I also had a question, just by looking at the list it kind of has a theme of what we can have, like the spells and such it reminds me of a Warcraft style that we have to go by, so do we have to follow a certain era or theme? Or is it any type of RP we want? Meaning, are all those items manitory or nescessary?

[Addicted to Oi!]

Well, your questions are many and varied, and I will answer them in turn.

The spells are pretty open, just like the techs. Just make them relative to your character, like if you have a priest character they're holy based or if you grew up with fire demons, they're fire based, etc.

You make your own RP with how you react to certain situations and how you choose to go forward. It's all of your design, really. And yes, the weapons are necessary.

[Cody.]

Allright, do we have to have spells though? I just don't want to make some RP relating to Zelda or something alike if I don't really have to.

Also, do I just post my profile once I am ready to RP? I noticed how each RP has only two people that RP together, is there a reason for that as well? and how do you know you is going to RP with you?

(Sorry about all the questions, I just don't want to get confused.)

[Aura]

Allright, do we have to have spells though? I just don't want to make some RP relating to Zelda or something alike if I don't really have to.

Also, do I just post my profile once I am ready to RP? I noticed how each RP has only two people that RP together, is there a reason for that as well? and how do you know you is going to RP with you?

(Sorry about all the questions, I just don't want to get confused.)

A person makes a profile, and a person "updates" them.

You post your profile once you get two "yes" votes.

Also, having spells does not mean you need to have a Legend of Zelda-style profile. Read some others, and come back if you have any questions.

[Zazu]

Zelda doesn't even have spells... Unless you count the Goddess' magic...

[Cody.]

Okay, I have an idea on what I will do, so how can I get 2 votes so that I may post my profile? Also, what do we do to get money? I noticed each profile has a total amount of money.

[Aura]

You get money in the profile, or by trading with other members.

...I want to know why not a single person posts outside of their profile.

[Cody.]

I see, so may I post a profile now?

[Aura]

Oh, sorry.

You can post a profile in here at any time. However, to make a thread, you must get two "yes" votes.

[Cody.]

Allright, I will post a profile in here later then.

[omnisaurus]

damn... im getting stress
how many "yes" votes i got?
if i dont have suficient... what i must change?
why do people forgot my registering ask?
all my information is correct?
why i cant edit my sig?They took it out forever?

EDIT: Well i readed some things that helped me understand...
there was saying that the only way to know how many time ill get it back
is talking to the moderator... allright who did it? and my answer stills: when ill get it back?

[Dark_Knight666]

Username: Dark_Knight666
RP name: Richter Tepes
Level: 1
Age: 26
Race: Human
Alignment:Neutral
Appearance: Shoulder Length Black Wavy Hair, Pure Black eyes, about "5, 7", White, Muscular like a barbarian, A Torn Red cape atop a Black Button up Jacket with Chains all along it, with a Tight(not skin tight) Black shirt under the Jacket, Black Baggy Jeans with a chain wallet. Various accessories such as Rings, an Ankh Necklace, Various Egyptian tattoos, one in particular is Richters eye looking like the Eye of Horus, and Black Boots with Metal plates up the Shins.
Weapon(s): Only one. Here is the format: *1000 Demons* (LV.1,*a Sickle on a Chain, a black blade with a Red tint on the Inside, a smooth, polished Redwood handle, and a titanium chain)
Armor: none
Spells: (max of four to start out with) Format : *Summon Demon* (Lv.1, *Able to Summon a Lvl. 1 Demon(it levels as I do) that will fight with me for a breif period of time, the demon has abilities as Fly, Fire, and Life Drain*)
*Ultra Slash*(Lv. 1, *Spinds the Sickle in a Giant Circle slashing all opponents in its path dealing critical damage*)
Fighting Techs: (max of two to start out with) Format: *Blade Mastery* (Lv.1, *Masterd all type fo fighting with any blade weapon, dealing extra damage*)
Items:
Money: 50
Background: Richter was Born in Auvergne. At the age of 9 he started to be come a master of the Blades, but he excelled in Sickles and Scythes. He got through school at the age of 16, He was very smart and Excelled in Math and Literature way beyond any other student. His father died in the War of Nations, a truly sad fate, he was a great man, warrior, Noblesman, and a Great Father most of all, he tough Richter most of all he knows, especially his combat skills. He lives with his mother who is very Ill. Richter is currently a shop owner in Auvergne, he has a small chain of his stores through the country of Arania. Richter seeks something different though, he wants adventure, the feel of adventure, action, just something different, so he decides to start off on a Journey so he leaves the business up to a close and Loyal friend named Nicholas De' Lenfent. The next Day Richter starts off on his Journey of Adventure...

[Cody.]

Username:Cody.
RP name: Lash (a.k.a) Nick Brown
Level: 1
Age: 29
Race: Human
Alignment: Lethal
Appearance: 6' 2'' medium length black hair, green eyes, muscular (Ripped), wears a black tanktop with black jeans and black and white "Converse" shoes (when in casual clothing) Wears a full black mask with a red arrow emblem over the mouth, black tights with a cartridge belt around the waist, long flared red gloves w/ red tall boots, long red cape.
Weapon(s): Only one. Here is the format: *Jackal* (LV.1,*A dagger, with to thin blades connected together with two "fangs" on each side of the blade)
Armor: none
Spells: (max of four to start out with) Format : *Last word* (Lv.1, *When allied with the Jackal, it will send a toxic that bleeds threw the opponent, causing him to die instantly*)
Fighting Techs: (max of two to start out with) Format: *Lethal Blades* (Lv.1, *Able to handle any blade during any fight (pocket knife vs. sword)*)
Items: smoke grenades (Used when desired to leave a battle undetected or to sneak on the enemy)
Money: 50
Background: Nick was a common New Yorker, determined to gain the reputation as a protector of the innocent when there is no other assistance around. He trained himself to use various blades against certain weapons and opponents, he soon became an excellent swordsmen. During the time he trained his blade handling skills he also took several martial arts classes, he became very familar with Muy Thai, a deadly martial art. As years past, he became well-known to the citizens of NY, and couldn't handle all the attention, thus he retired for a while. After several more years, he decided to create a costume for himself, and regain his reputation as a masked viglante, the lethal protector known as "Lash"

[omnisaurus]

Registering.... thats all fixed, no god-mod, spells arent "nondescript"... (EDITED)


Username: omnisaurus
RP name: Haku
Level: 1
Age: 14
Race: Human
Alignment: Neutral
Appearance: A guy with strange white hairs, and an uncommon eye's color (yellow, if allowed) has 1,89 cm, he wear a cool brown glove and he got an very very cool leather robe (not mages robe, the adventurer's one) and some rags on his back as a cape with a nice hood but he only uses it when winter comes. Haku got many scars around his body but none at his face. He also has white skin and a strange symbol at his neck. His hair looks a little spiky at middle and has some.... hmm
better say his hair looks like the DragonBall anime: Goku but a little more spiky and its white

Weapon(s): Just a sword that Haku calls Deribor (nothing special) Lv.1
Armor: none

Spells:
Stun Lv.1 - A sword hit that hits one vital point of the victim or somewhere else that makes it unable to move, attack or cast any spells for a short period of time (3 or 4 seconds);

Watch Lv.1 - From far of the monster (or near, maybe hided maybe not), Haku watches him (the targeted monster) using his special ability or a move that only creatures of their race can do then Haku tryes to copy it and learn it at a similar form (not same cuz he doesnt have an tail or something else);

Egg Care Lv.1 - An special love with any egg he posses and take care until it hatches. Makes the monster obey him (after hatched) and like Haku with a special love that the monster is more "adaptable" to pass long period of times in cities, also the monster is a little stronger and more intelligent than the other of their races;

Tame Lv.1 - When a monster is weak Haku tryes to tame him, maybe talking to him or taking care of his wounds or something else, you should be asking yourself why Haku does it that easy? Simple! He watches monsters so he know what they like (food, sleeping place, main enemy, etc...);

Fighting Techs:
Wild Strike Lv.1 - A very strong attack that may throw the enemie to the ground and if struck at a vital point the enemy has small chances to die instantly.
Howling moon Lv.1 - When at full moon, running great risk, his wild spirit "howls" to the moon, unsleashing his deepest powers, the nature of these powers depends of his feelings.
Items: none
Money: 50

Background: A guy that really likes monsters and like taming the ones he think will be good companion, and also, he watches the creatures so much (he likes them) that he sometimes try to copy their skills, even if he fails.
He born at a village and lived there until he had 4 to 5 years, where he knew how beauty an monster can be if you give him love, then he started to appreciate all monsters. When he got 7 years he ALREADY was at city (he dont remeber exactly when).
This guy has a sword that he calls it as Deribor, he appreciates it.
He likes natural places like plains, rivers, falls, mountains and forests
but he preffers to sleep and live at city. His yellow colored eyes has something with his Blood Line, that once it has crossed it with a monster's Blood Line, as we see, it only changed the family eye's color... is that what he thinks, but now Haku suspect of that fact once he never saw a monster with yellow colored eyes... Haku got an deepheart mission of find out what he got running on his veins, wich monster his BloodLine was crossed and what he got of different of other humans. And if he is really an human.

[Addicted to Oi!]

...They're quite unique spells, aren't they Valreki?

(Refusal to Call Him Wing Society in action!)

I'm not sure about the background, but I'll give you a tentative "yea" unless someone sees something that is not right, in which case we'll do all we can to help you get a file.

[Dark_Knight666]

Who are you giving the yes to? Just wondering

[Aura]

Okay, I am becoming really worried at the sudden influx of people with low post counts joining Illuyad so quickly.

I say no. First, those spells and techs REALLY wouldn't work. Second, the names aren't very creative.

[Addicted to Oi!]

I say "Who cares?" to the name thing, and an "Agreed" to the spells.

Omni, I can tell you're good at this, and you've put up with us more than most, but you should look at other profiles, see what really works in combat, and decide if these are really what you want.

[omnisaurus]

right... ill see what matters when combating

EDIT: thanks for the advice again, i edited my profile
and also, when you is talking to me say my name so im not getting confused

EDIT: Well its all ok, spells fixed for a good rp and i now stronger, i know there is a "god-mode" tech around there but i hope the updaters dont cares much about it...

[Addicted to Oi!]

Only one problem. You added two more techs, but I'm sure with your unique profile and very, VERY enthusiastic approach, you'll do fine if you omit two of them.

Luke, please, let's prolong his suffering no longer!

[Wolfboy122]

so have i ever gotten accpeted yet?

[SeaShade]

Username: SeaShade
RP name: Genas Fin
Level: 1
Age: 17
Race: Human
Alignment: Evil
Appearance: A tall, althetic body. He has short, brown hair and is white-caucasian. He wears a skin-tight body suit of black leather and a black bandana on his head.
Weapon(s): Nights Dagger (LV.1, A cursed dagger, this taints the body with more and more evil as it levels up)
Armor: None
Spells: His abilities to wield the mystics of the earth have yet to be discovered. Maybe when he is stronger as a person and a mind.
Fighting Techs: Boomer (Lv.1, The user throws his weapon at an enemy. The accuracy and power of the throw increases with the abilities level)
Items:
Money: 50
Background: Genas was a great learner as a child and wanted to follow his father's running athletics, until one fateful day came. Two mercenaries killed his father, being sent to retrieve data that could have created a war against an evil king. After the death of his father he was put in an orphanage. Now old enough to ventures the ends of the land on his own, he prepares to justify the world in his own means... murder. A fairly inexperienced fighter, he will venture to train himself and rid the world of its faults.

EDIT: This is to Addicted-sry about that i wasn't trying to god mod i was just trying to create a way of saying he will become powerful over time. he's not supposed to miraculously save illuyad or anything sry. oh, and ill just change his dad's career.

[Addicted to Oi!]

Okay, the whole "he is powerful, but he doesn't know it" might be okay in the School of Battle, but it gets annoying and a bit god-moddish here. Also, the sythesis, trade, and circulation of opiates and other narcotics really wasn't prevelent in the Middle Ages, on which Illuyad is based.

[Aura]

Well, Ryan, Illuyad IS lawless. And even though it might be based on the middle ages, it has many traits of the modern world, and also the future world. The drug thing is fine.

Like I said a few posts back, what is with the sudden influx of people who type in chatspeak coming in here?

[Addicted to Oi!]

I just wouldn't expect a drug trade to pop up in the frame of culture that it's based in, that's all.

[Aura]

Well, like I said before: A world with no limits.

I have plans for some very gruesome things to come about soon. Sometimes, being creative has its downfalls.

[SeaShade]

So am I accepted? Do I have to have an updater?

[Addicted to Oi!]

No, you're not until you change it. Apparently, the drug thing is good, but like I said, you can't have "he is very powerful, but he doesn't know it." It just makes it too easy to completely cheat and godmod.

[SeaShade]

Username: SeaShade

RP name: Genas Fin

Level: 1

Age: 17

Race: Human

Alignment: Evil

Appearance: A tall, althetic body. He has short, brown hair and is white-caucasian. He wears a skin-tight body suit of black leather and a black bandana on his head.

Weapon(s): Nights Dagger (LV.1, A cursed dagger that taints the body with evil)

Armor: None

Spells: He has no possible abilities at this time.
Fighting Techs: End Kick (Lv.1, The user impales the enemy with the weapon and kicks the weapon deeper into the enemy, then rips the weapon out)

Items:

Money: 50

Background: Genas was an excellent learner as a child and had many great ambitions. His father, a great lawyer, was the greatest of Genas's role-models. The thought of being famous and justifying the evils of the world thrilled Genas, as he kept his daily works in school at the best of achievements.

One fateful morning he woke up and did his chores before he left for school. Genas entered to his father's bedroom to wake him up and only found the dead body of the one he once loved. He figured it must have been the works of a druglord, Malzom Mits, who was being tracked by Genas's father's agents.

After the death of his father, Genas was sent to an orphanage where he was released at the age of seventeen. Isolated from the outside world for the past five years, he was sent into a place he had forgotten. He commits himself to the revenge of his father through fighting the evils that he can.

[Addicted to Oi!]

It's cohesive, and the background is original. Nice job on the second try.

I'll give it a "yea", but you need two acceptances before you can make a profile.

[omnisaurus]

ahh
please say yes to my profile now or say no.
thats my profile if it isnt aproved then it ISNT aproved.
if not ill go forever but if yes im going to play with you ppl

[Addicted to Oi!]

Fine, yes.

Now, be sure to work on the spells, though, and make sure you make your RPs easy to read and cohesive.

[Dragonforce1337]

Username: dragonforce1337
RP name: Duir Moreld
Level: 1
Age: 16
Race: Vampire
Alignment: Evil
Appearance: long white hair and black blood stained armor
Weapon(s): Elmm lv.1 a silver longsword with demonic runes on it’s handel
Armor: none
Spells:
Transform: lv.1 duir transforms into a animal the higher level the more powerful the animal is
Shadow: duir join into the shadow that hes standing in making him invisible
Fighting Techs:
split: lv.1 duir splits his sword into two short swords
Items:
Money: 50
Background: when he was young a vampire took over the village that he lived in. he tried to fight it with the rest of the villagers to take back the village. but in the battle he was bitten and the rest of the village shunned him

[Addicted to Oi!]

Except for some grammar issues and some spell problems, it looks alright, though a bit short (nothing a good RP couldn't fix).

I would say make the Transform spell a bit more specific in its purpose and use, and maybe lengthen out the background.

[Aura]

Okay, I really, REALLY want to know why the only people who join nowadays have only one or two posts.

I also want to know why ALL of these people cannot follow the format OR type to save their lives.

First, Dragonforce is a terrible band. Second, learn to spell. Third, follow the format. Fourth, vampires do not exist in Illuyad. Fifth, transformation spells are not allowed. Sixth, in your transformation spell, it says Duir can become larger the higher the level. No, do NOT include that in the description. Seventh, your Shadow spell has WAY too many oppertunities for godmodding. Eighth, the split thing would not work. Ninth, the background is pointless.

[Dr. Manhattan]

Username: dragonforce1337

RP name: Duir Moreld

Level: 1

Age: 16

Race: Vampire

Alignment: Evil

Appearance: Long white hair, tall, wearing black blood stained armor.

__________________________________________________ _________________

Weapon(s):

Elmm Lv.1 (A silver longsword with demonic runes on it’s handle.)

Armor: none

Spells:

(Insert Spells)

Fighting Techs:

Split: Lv.1 {Duir splits his sword into two short swords.)


__________________________________________________ _________________


Items:

Money: 50

Background: MAKE BETTER!

Luke, why wouldn't the split work? It seems valid to me. Also, how was he supposed to know that their aren't any vampires in Illuyad?

Dragonforce1337: Here's a nicer cleaned up version for you :^:

Username: dragonforce1337

RP name: Duir Moreld

Level: 1

Age: 16

Race: Vampire

Alignment: Evil

Appearance: Long white hair, tall, wearing black blood stained armor.

__________________________________________________ _________________

Weapon(s):

Elmm Lv.1 (A silver longsword with demonic runes on it’s handle.)

Armor: none

Spells:

(Insert Spells)

Fighting Techs:

Split: Lv.1 {Duir splits his sword into two short swords.)


__________________________________________________ _________________


Items:

Money: 50

Background: MAKE BETTER!

[Addicted to Oi!]

...God dammit, Luke.

You're literally trying to kill this forum, aren't you? Insulting members, completely alienating them, and yelling at new people who have good intentions because they didn't know things that you just invented in the post that you YELLED AT THEM IN!

Don't take your frustration out on someone who actually wants to participate in this forum that you have grown completely apathetic about. Please, adress the people you're actually angry at directly.

[Dragonforce1337]

Username: dragonforce1337

RP name: Duir Moreld

Level: 1

Age: 16

Race: Human

Alignment: Evil

Appearance: Long white hair, tall, wearing black blood stained armor.

__________________________________________________ _________________

Weapon(s):

Elmm Lv.1 (A silver longsword with demonic runes on it’s handle.)

Armor: none

Spells:

Blend Duir blends in with his surroundings it doesnt make him invisible thought just kind of camouflouged.

Sear Duir causes fire to cover his enemies bodies.

Fighting Techs:

Split: Lv.1 (Duir splits his sword into two short swords.)


__________________________________________________ _________________


Items:

Money: 50

Background: Duir was raised in a simple town that was actually a place for mages to be trained. On his tenth birthday he was acepted into the mage guild and taught how to use magic of differant kind.



I made my background differant and changed and added some spells. I dont get why you dont want me to join i just want to roleplay and have fun. I hope you guys think that its better now. Oh and Dr.Cox thanks for the help.

[Addicted to Oi!]

No, it's not that from him, he's just frustrated.

It looks better, but I still think the background could be longer.

I give him a "yea."

You need two people to accept you (okay, two updaters) before you can post your profile.

[Aura]

That is the most beautiful profile I have seen in awhile. Accepted.

...God dammit, Luke.

You're literally trying to kill this forum, aren't you? Insulting members, completely alienating them, and yelling at new people who have good intentions because they didn't know things that you just invented in the post that you YELLED AT THEM IN!

Don't take your frustration out on someone who actually wants to participate in this forum that you have grown completely apathetic about. Please, adress the people you're actually angry at directly.


It isn't my fault Dragonforce is a terrible band. :tease:

But, really, I am not trying to kill this forum.

[Addicted to Oi!]

You just don't go around insulting people, Luke. Especially people who actually want to participate.

You can go post your profile, Dragonforce, and name it "Duir Moreld"

You can choose your updater from myself, Wing here, or Zep.

[Dragonforce1337]

I think I would like to have Wing maybe he'll be able to teach me how to be a better roleplayer and he will get to learn to like me.

That is the most beautiful profile I have seen in awhile. Accepted.

you can probably thank dr.Cox for that.

[Storm Wolf]

Seeing new people registering makes me want to make another profile. Hehehe. Might do one in a minute.

[Aura]

Seeing new people registering makes me want to make another profile. Hehehe.

Dibs on updating it.

I'm serious.

[Storm Wolf]

If I can make a proper start on it now, I can be done with it in about, ooooooohh I dunno, 15 mins.

Edit: Well, not quite 15 minutes, but oh well.
__________

Username: Storm Wolf
RP name: Xion Ortega
Level: 1
Age: 21
Race: Human
Alignment: Holy

Appearance: Xion is a tall, with long white hair and his eyes have purple iris'. He is of average build and often wears a grayish blue robe that falls short of his knees.

Weapon:
Soul Katana Lv.1, (A katana that holds a purple gem in the base of the handle.)

Armor: none

Spells:
Dancing Flames Lv.1, (Xion creates a hord of fireballs that are hurled at the enemy.)

Aura Strike Lv.1, (Xion uses his light aura to create powerful beams of energy. pure demonic foes are most affected by it.)

Infernos Lv.1 (Xion sends a wave of fire at his opponent.)

Holy Thunder Lv.1 (Orbs of light encircle the foe, and expell their energy as bolts of lightning.)

Fighting Techs:
None, yet.

Items: None
Money: 50

Background:
Xion Ortega was a young boy obsessed with magic. He dedicated much of his free time working on his magical heritage along with his grandfather, who taught him some powerful fire and light spells. He did not like to fight, and wasn't much of a warrior like his father, but he could wield a sword with decent skill and had amazing spellcasting abilities.

[Addicted to Oi!]

Ortega, eh?

I say "yes", of course.

[Dr. Manhattan]

Well even though my opinion means nothing because I'm not an updater, I still say yes. :link: <--- Stolen from Vash.

[Aura]

Try, just TRY, to guess what I am about to say.

Just GUESS.

[Dr. Manhattan]

Try, just TRY, to guess what I am about to say.

Just GUESS.

That is the most beautiful profile I have seen in awhile. Accepted.

[Aura]

That is the most beautiful profile I have seen in awhile. Accepted.

Curse you for making me laugh.

Curse you.

But, yes, I would have said that.

Also, you copied and pasted that, didn't you?

[Dr. Manhattan]

Curse you for making me laugh.

Curse you.

But, yes, I would have said that.

Also, you copied and pasted that, didn't you?

No. :paranoid:

[Aura]

That is the most beautiful profile I have seen in awhile. Accepted.

That is the most beautiful profile I have seen in awhile. Accepted.

Yes, you copied it.

[Dr. Manhattan]

Yes, you copied it.

Pfft, you and your fancy logic.

[Aura]

Ahem.

Are you stating you have no logic?

Anyway, to the Illuyad discussion thread with our conversation, which is really just a Random Speak Thread.

[Storm Wolf]

I have not been here for a mission of a time for posting a profile, so I have forgotten a few things after the profile process. Okay so I have at the moment two "yes" votes on my profile, I am now allowed to make a profile and call it "Xion Ortega", Correct?

Now Luke, I saw that you wanted dibs on my profile. I'm wondering what you have in store for my character...

[Aura]

Correct. You may now make the profile.

[Storm Wolf]

Nice one. It's up!!

[acrobatic]

OK. I'm not impatient here. I've waited soo long. Like a few months. NO one has accepted me yet.

[Storm Wolf]

*tries to ignore...* Bah I can't do it!!

I think you was accepted by didn't make a profile. Go check back a few pages.

[acrobatic]

I did, no one even remembered me a bit.

[Storm Wolf]

Okay, when was the last time you were here?

[acrobatic]

About 4 months...I was moving and stuff, but now I'm back, and I'm still not accepted.

[Zazu]

They don't have to accept you. If it's not up to par, you won't get accepted.

[acrobatic]

Awww, why not?

[Storm Wolf]

Well, actually, one of them did approve of your profile, after you made what seemed like 10 modifications. I've been checking the forum for your profile.

[acrobatic]

Yeah, one, but I need 2 to play.

[Storm Wolf]

Well, your profile is a little, scattered. I'll PM it to you.

[acrobatic]

Can't I play yet? Please.

[Storm Wolf]

Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. Don't annoy us like you did before... Okay?

Sorry, but you'll have to post your profile again and be retried for acception. You'll be getting a PM from me, it will be your profile. Copy and paste it. to here when you get it. And don't reply to here unless it's with your profile included. Got it?

[acrobatic]

Username: acrobatic
RP name: Lysho
Level: 1
Age: 15
Race: Elf
Alignment: Holy
Appearance:
Lysho has rough blue jeans with faded marks of orange +'s. On his shirt it is green with faded marks of white +'s. Has his sword sticking out from behind his back because it is helded tightly from his shirt.

Weapons:Wooden Apprentince Wand.-Looks like a basic piece of circular short wood with a small purple ball attacked to the top with a fragile string. The ball is dirty and the string, very loose.
Armor: none.
Spells: Shield (Lv.1, Creates a magical barrier made from Light that protects against three blows against the caster, reducing damage by half.)
Fighting Tech:
Double-Hit (Lv. 1, This atatck will cause the character to strike two times in the speed of one,doing 1.5 regular damage than usual.)

Items: none
Money: 50

Background:
When Lysho was young, all he wanted to be when he grew up was to be like his father. His father was just a normal fighter, but he still fought. Until one day his father was kicked off the army that was fighting against the advancing monsters because he spared mercy to an enemy that was nearly dead. Lysho's father then had to work as a water carrier. He went back and forth from wells to people's houses. Lysho was very mad and he knew his father wanted his job back. So Lysho decides he wanted to be a normal fighter just like his dad and make his dad proud. He wanted his dad to feel that at least someone in this family is still fighting. So Lysho started off easy by being a squire. Years later, Lysho started combat training. He was ready.

There.


I edited it now.Again

[Storm Wolf]

Okay, I'm not an updater, but I can tell you what needs to be modified.

You are only allowed one weapon now. Choose one and add a little more detail aout what it looks like. Other than that, it looks pretty alright. I'll let the other higher authority members give you the votes. Don't forget you need two votes of acceptance. Good Luck, and be patient :^:

[Aura]

Okay, ready yourself.

The spell and the tech both have potential for godmodding. Also, spells and techs are much more descriptive than that. Read a few profiles to get an idea.

Like Storm Wolf said, you are only allowed one weapon. I know you don't exactly have two weapons, but pick one: sword or staff.

Also, in your profile, it said Lysho's father was in the army. Define "army" for us, please.

[Dr. Manhattan]

It's a good looking profile and I think that if you worked at it a teeny bit you'll be in. And don't mind the "opening for godmodding" Luke does that to everyone. :P

[Zazu]

Yeah, everything has an opening for godmodding. My second character is the most godmoddish character here and he accepted it. He's just picky and doesn't like people with less than half his posts.:P

But, really, it looks good. If I were (still) an updater, I'd give you a yes.

[Aura]

Yeah, everything has an opening for godmodding. My second character is the most godmoddish character here and he accepted it. He's just picky and doesn't like people with less than half his posts.:P

But, really, it looks good. If I were (still) an updater, I'd give you a yes.

Why do you post here if you never post in your profiles?

[zombiekiller33]

Username: Zombiekiller33
RP name: Luke
Level: 1
Age: 18
Race: human
Alignment: neutral, alies with people of same goals.
Appearance: Luke wears a green and brown. he is 6 feet tall with blonde and blue eyes. He is weak in strength. he also wears green gloves.
Weapon(s): Only one. Here is the format: *Glass bow and poisoned arrows* (LV.1,* A glass bow with arrows the are laced with poison)
Armor: none
Spells: (max of four to start out with) Format : *summon wind/ summon water, summun ice* (Lv.1, *Wild winds emerge for 10 sec / Relentless rain emerges for 10sec / Hellish hail is summoned for 10 sec.* the time the last inc. as their lvls go up.)
Fighting Techs: (max of two to start out with) Format: *hawk eye* (Lv.1, *gives 100% accuracy when the surrounding area is calm and quiet.*)
Items: quiver, vial os poison, poisoned leaves.
Money: 50
Background: Luke was 8 when his village was the spot of two armies battle. As him and his parents tried to escape his father sheilded him from a sky full of arrows. in shock i was unable to move, my mother grabbed me and we ran. A man in red slaughterd my mother for some quick cash. I ran before he went for me. I hid in the same spot in the woods for several hours. A young girl, alexia, who i fell in love with brought me to her home. her father, a skilled archer, taught me the ways of archery and survival skills. her mother tought me how to make potions and magic. both also died from a fire. Alexia and I traveled and weded when we were 16. she died 3 months ago from a militia man in a weird red blood armour. I know vowe to help all that need it.

[Dr. Manhattan]

Username: Zombiekiller33

RP name: Luke

Level: 1

Age: 18

Race: Human

Alignment: Neutral, but sometimes he allies with people of the same goals.

Appearance: Luke wears green and brown. he is 6 feet tall with blonde and blue eyes. He doesn't have a lot of upper body strength. he also wears green gloves.

__________________________

Weapon(s): Iaph (LV.1, A glass bow with arrows the are laced with poison)

Armor: none

Spells:

Summon Wind (Lv.1, Wild winds emerge around Luke.)

Summon Water (Lv.1, Relentless rain appears around the area the Luke is in.)

Summon Ice (Lv.1, Hellish hail is summoned)

Fighting Techs:

Hawk Eye (Lv.1, Increases the accuracy of Luke's shots)

__________________________

Items:

Money: 50

Background: Luke was 8 when his village was the spot of two armies battle. As him and his parents tried to escape his father shielded him from a sky full of arrows. In shock Luke was unable to move, his mother grabbed him and they ran. A man in red slaughtered his mother for some quick cash. Luke ran before the man in red tried to kill him as well. He hid in the same spot in the woods for several hours. A young girl, Alexia, who Luke fell in love with brought me to her home. her father, a skilled archer, taught him the ways of archery and survival skills. Her mother taught Luke how to make potions and magic. Both died from a fire. Alexia and him traveled and were wed when they were 16. She was murdered by the same man in red that killed Luke's mother.

Username: Zombiekiller33

RP name: Luke

Level: 1

Age: 18

Race: Human

Alignment: Neutral, but sometimes he allies with people of the same goals.

Appearance: Luke wears green and brown. he is 6 feet tall with blonde and blue eyes. He doesn't have a lot of upper body strength. he also wears green gloves.

__________________________

Weapon(s): Iaph (LV.1, A glass bow with arrows the are laced with poison)

Armor: none

Spells:

Summon Wind (Lv.1, Wild winds emerge around Luke.)

Summon Water (Lv.1, Relentless rain appears around the area the Luke is in.)

Summon Ice (Lv.1, Hellish hail is summoned)

Fighting Techs:

Hawk Eye (Lv.1, Increases the accuracy of Luke's shots)

__________________________

Items:

Money: 50

Background: Luke was 8 when his village was the spot of two armies battle. As him and his parents tried to escape his father shielded him from a sky full of arrows. In shock Luke was unable to move, his mother grabbed him and they ran. A man in red slaughtered his mother for some quick cash. Luke ran before the man in red tried to kill him as well. He hid in the same spot in the woods for several hours. A young girl, Alexia, who Luke fell in love with brought me to her home. her father, a skilled archer, taught him the ways of archery and survival skills. Her mother taught Luke how to make potions and magic. Both died from a fire. Alexia and him traveled and were wed when they were 16. She was murdered by the same man in red that killed Luke's mother.

Here's a much nicer looking version. I also fixed a couple of the spells and fixed your bio. DO NOT REPOST THIS! Just copy the coding IF you are accepted.

Luke, is it the most beautiful profile you've seen in a while?

[Shi-KageMaru]

Username: Shi-Kagemaru
RP name: Kagemaru
Level: 1
Age: 17
Race: Human
Alignment: Japanese
Appearance: Shrouded by a black Ninja Mask
Weapon(s): Katana *LV.1*
Armor: Black Ninja robes
Spells: Jitsu of Ikazui *LV.1* (Surrounds controller in lightning, making them temporarily invincible) Jitsu of Fushin *LV.1* (Splits controller's form into five, fooling the enemy)
Fighting Techs: Kumdo *LV.1# (Ancient Korean martial art, which uses swords)
Items: none
Money: 50
Background: Kagemaru is a ninja master.

[Storm Wolf]

Way too vague for my liking. Also, I am not overkeen on the Jitsu of Ikazui spell. Invincible, for any amount of time, is godmodding. You need more info on the appearance, more on the bio, and a description on the weapon. Also no armour, the black ninja robes can be included in the appearance section.

[Dr. Manhattan]

And to add onto that, your alignment is not "Japanese" it would be "Evil" or "Good" or something of the sort.

[Pencil Thief]

Username: Pencil Thief
RP Name: Akemi
Level:1
Age: 12
Race: Human
Alignment: Neutral
Appearance: His shaggy brown hair often falls into his eyes. He stands only 5 feet 1 inch tall. He wears a dark green cloak that covers his whole figure, but when it is blown out of the way it reveals grey pants and light armor that covers his torso.
Weapon(s): *Racian* (Lv.1 *A sword with a jet black handle and a pure white blade. It is about an arm and a half’s length. It was formed when light and dark magic collided.*)
Armor: Dark green armor that ways about 2 pounds.
Spells: *Healing Spell* (Lv. 1 *When used correctly, can heal large wounds. When the user is not skilled in magic, it can only heal scrapes and bruises.*)
*Splitter* (Lv. 1 (* Uses magic to separate the light and dark magic in his sword, splitting it into 2 swords, one black, and one white.*)
Fighting Techs: *Double Edge* (Lv. 1 *Uses splitter to split his sword, then infuses them with a small amount of magical power, allowing them to shoot balls of condensed energy*)
Items: None
Money: 50
Background: He was and still is coveted by those of Holy and Demonic alignments for his unnatural skill in swordplay for his age. Both sought to have him as an ally, but Akemi disliked that they treated him as a pawn, and not a real person, therefore he declined all of their requests to join them. One day those of the Demonic alignment decided that if he thought himself too good to be their ally, then he did not deserve to live. This forced him to leave the small town he had called home, and search for a place he could find refuge and protection. He is very mature for his age, having to grow up fast after his parents and older brother were killed. As a result of having to fend for himself, he has only increased his ability with the sword since leaving.

I know, I'm not good at making up names for spells and the like.

[Aura]

Okay, a few problems.

There are no such things as Holy or Demonic alignments. Alignments simply state how you align yourself. Like it says, a Valengan might have an alignment of Valenga. It is simply how you align your character, or where your character's loyalties lie.

You do not need * in the descriptions.

You start out with no armor.

And, the profile says he was hunted by both sides (which do not exist) due to his sword mastery. That is called godmodding. Characters are normal people.

[Angel]

Okay, a few problems.

There are no such things as Holy or Demonic alignments. Alignments simply state how you align yourself. Like it says, a Valengan might have an alignment of Valenga. It is simply how you align your character, or where your character's loyalties lie.

You do not need * in the descriptions.

You start out with no armor.

And, the profile says he was hunted by both sides (which do not exist) due to his sword mastery. That is called godmodding. Characters are normal people.

Quit changing it as you go along. Your original bio format said 'Holy/Angelic, Demonic/Evil, or Neutral'.

Check everyone else's profile's Luke, EVEN YOUR OWN. They all say that.

[Dr. Manhattan]

Sorry dude but I'm going to have to go with Andi on this one.

Alignment: Holy

Alignment: Evil/Devilish

Alignment: Sinister

Alignment: Holy

Notice how yours says what you said is incorrect?

And, the profile says he was hunted by both sides (which do not exist) due to his sword mastery. That is called godmodding. Characters are normal people.

That's not godmodding, it's an opening for a plot. If you're going to say that's godmodding than anything that anyone writes is godmodding.

[Angel]

If you're making Alignment like that, make it Heritage, not Alignment.

[Dr. Manhattan]

Or Alliance, but not Alignment.

[Aura]

I NEVER said the Alignment was wrong. I just said Holy and Demonic alignments do not exist as actual "factions."