The Supreme Warriors Training Grounds

[Adriel]

Welcome to the supreme warriors Training grounds, here the older members of the clan may train the younger members, and you can have practice fight.

The only rules are

No Flaming
No spamming

keep it clean and try and keep it just to training and practice fighting, and keep the talking in the clan.

[The Flame]

You know about me being trained by DA. I'm just gonna wait until he's ready.

[Double Agent]

It's you who should be ready.

OK, since you say you have never RPed before, I want to know how much you know about the rules of RPing. Tell me everything you know about it.

[The Flame]

It's you who should be ready.

OK, since you say you have never RPed before, I want to know how much you know about the rules of RPing. Tell me everything you know about it.

eheheh, ahem.....nothing. Adriel PMed me about joining his clan, even though I know nothing about RPing. She made me a leader because I was the first to join.

[Double Agent]

OK...

1. You wrote she and from what I know, Adriel is a he. Look at his GW profile info.

2. So you say you don't know anything... OK... Have you at least seen what a RP is? If you haven't, look at my current training in the Diablos: http://forums.gamewinners.com/forums/showthread.php?t=511434&page=3 The third and fourth page.

[Adriel]

hey good job, just don't make it too hard on him, I asked him to join, and He'll learn..... I hope. j/k

[The Flame]

Oops, sorry. I sometimes do that depending on what the user name sounds like. I knew Adriel was a guy though.

I've read part of a training before, it got kind of confusing. But for the most part I understood, I hope.:D

[Double Agent]

Fine. I want you to post a RP. You can post anything but not less then 3 paragraphs and each paragraph needs to have 3 lines minimum. Good luck.

P.S. Sorry for being late. Monday is when I get back to GW after my off days(SAT and SUN) and I need to organize what I missed in the week-end.

[The Flame]

Fine. I want you to post a RP. You can post anything but not less then 3 paragraphs and each paragraph needs to have 3 lines minimum. Good luck.
D@mn. I was afraid of this:D....even though I saw it coming. But, is this like a battle thing or....what? Because I've only read a battle before. Is it the same thing as an RP? D@mn. I was afraid of this:D....confusion.

[Double Agent]

Right now, I just want to see your writing skills. Write a simple RP, well put some effort into it, about anything. The battle will come later.

[The Flame]

That's my problem, I know what a battle is, but not an RP.

[Double Agent]

Oh ok... RP comes from Role Playing which means you get a character and you write "adventures" with him/her. OK?
Here's some links to recent RPs:

http://forums.gamewinners.com/forums/showthread.php?t=513637&page=4
http://forums.gamewinners.com/forums/showthread.php?p=6963167#post6963167

Look at the long posts. Those are RPs. In RPs, you can choose to write first-person(Ex. I do that) or third-person(Ex. He did that). But don't write: I wake up and go make some coffee. That's noobish. Write for example: He woke up and went to make some coffee.

OK, to see if I need to explain more thoroughly or if you understood, use your character name and write how you woke up and went to the arena to see some fights. Describe the fights very well.

Let's say your name is Blah. Here's and example of how you can start: Blah woke up in his soft, relaxing bed. He was in a rectangular room filled with all kind of...

Of course, don't use "Blah" as your name. It was just an example. Make it at least 5 lines. Good luck!

[Xellos]

...


actually, the Clubs and Clans wars post size limit for an introductory post is 10 lines... ;)

*ahem*

*hides back in the shadows*

[The Flame]

OK, to see if I need to explain more thoroughly or if you understood, use your character name and write how you woke up and went to the arena to see some fights. Describe the fights very well.
I think I understand completely now: Everyone creates a character. Most often a specific topic for the setting. Everyone tells about their own character's progress in the story, when it's their turn. Something like that right? And by "lines" do you mean sentences or each time the words drop down another line. Oh and one more thing, how much dialogue would you say would be...."tolerable", like before people will lose interest.

OK, here goes. hmm...I'll write 10 or more lines then. I'll describe the "fights" in wrestling style because I can relate to that.

Flame woke up on the hard wooden floorboards. He figured he must have fallen out of bed again. Today was the big day; the day he had tickets to watch the fights down at the arena. He slipped on his black leather jacket and almost forgot to open the door as he hurried out onto the seemingly endless road. At the end of the road stood the enormous newly remodeled arena. He turned in his tickets and grabbed a seat in the fourth row. The first fight had already begun between a very muscular Mexican man and a plump white man wearing a yellow and blue mask. The white man was bashing the Mexican's head into a turnbuckle, but the he froze, for another man had attacked him from behind. It was a very tall person, continuing to pummel him in the back with a large club. The masked man ducked, then dropkicked him in the back, sending him face first into the metal turnbuckle, face full of blood. The Mexican was back, and had just dived onto him from a turnbuckle. He was then pinned.

Sorry I had to shorten it up A LOT, because I was short on time, and I had already had more than 10....didn't want to make it too long.

[Double Agent]

OK it's a very good start from someone who didn't even know what a RP is. The dialogs are even recommended but be careful when you're in a fight with someone else. You can't make his character say something the person doesn't want to. But that's only limited to RPBs.

Your post is as I mentioned good, and what I like is that your spelling and grammar are good. I would recommend you write in Microsoft Word or a similiar word processor so you keep up the good work.

OK, I want you to make it a little longer. At least 3 paragraphs. Also, break down your block of text. Most people won't even read it if it isn't in paragraphs. In conclusion, break your post into paras and add a few more paras. Good luck.

Xellos, don't mess with his mind. He didn't even know what a RP was. You can, and it is recommended, to write more than ten lines.

[Adriel]

ok, keep going your doing good, don't let this die.

[Double Agent]

Well, i'm waiting for FC...

[The Flame]

Well, i'm waiting for FC...
Well, to be honest you guys can stop waiting...because I'm just bored with the idea and I kinda believe I would be able to do it if I really wanted to anyway. Sorry for the trouble. And as much as I might hate to say it later.......I think I'm going to leave this clan. See Ya Adriel/Double Agent. And plus, I have to monitor my South Park Clan, Comedy Club, and WWE Club. Soooo, yeah bye.

[Adriel]

ok, well that sucks, anyone want to practice battle?