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Stephen Lynch
October 11th, 2006, 06:54 PM
Adam Pugh is in his own private locker room, and by this I mean a medium sized janitor closet that has been cleaned out, painted ice blue, and black posters covering the wall behind him with a blue lining around them. Adam is sitting on a backwards care, palette in hand and painting on paper for once.


Adam Pugh
Smirnov… is nothing more than a crybaby who can not except defeat when he is outsmarted. Nick, one day you will wake up and realize that you can not by everything you want, and you are just some selfish spoiled rich kid who doesn’t know how to not get what he wants.

He stops, calms down, squirts some more paint onto the palette, starts to paint again, and starts talking once more.

Well, it's another night, and another peice of art. On this night, I enter the painting as part of the World Title tournament. I face Rich Storrs, some rookie, but I have decided not to take it as a threat. I have suffered far to long. It is my time to shine, try to rattle me and I will take you out. You will remember the name Adam Pugh…

At this point he pushes his brush a little harder but calms down and continues.

Rich, You burn money like its nothing, but you need to realize that what you throw to the side so fast, is what will be your downfall. I will wipe your canvas clean and paint part of my own masterpiece onto it.

Pauses again, sets down the palette, stands, and stares right into the camera.

Just as art has no boundries, neither does Adam Pugh.

Adam stares at the camera, then turns around and exits the locker room.

Dean
October 12th, 2006, 08:55 AM
Man, Pugh has some awesome lines. Nice work. Saw a few typos in this one, like using to instead of too. I also noticed some run-ons.

Stephen Lynch
October 12th, 2006, 03:28 PM
Aww, the run-ons! I thought I took care of all of them. The to instead of too, I need to read these more carefully, spellcheck doesn't do everything after all.

Thanks for the comment. I like the lines I came up with, but I think Joe's closing statement still is the best in it. But some of them are staying, Like:

"Well, it's another night, and another peice of art. On this night, I enter the painting as part of the..." Whatever match.

and

"I will wipe your canvas clean and paint part of my own masterpiece onto it. "


But I am still thinking of more.

Kavian
October 12th, 2006, 04:25 PM
Yeah I like your character, Catch. I picture Adam Pugh as Matt Striker mixed with William Regal type heel though for some strange reason. Hmm... I guess he's supposed to be the fun babyface though, right?

Stephen Lynch
October 12th, 2006, 06:26 PM
Not Sure, he is kind of a tweener, but when a heel, you nailed it. He is always like Striker due to the Vocabulary, but when heel it is the "I'm better than you" like gimmick. Right now I'm not sure whether to make him heel or let him be face, so I am letting him ride in a little as a tweener before I make a decision.