"Get Ready to Pay, cause here I come" Rich Storrs vignette

[$ean]

We see Rich Storrs standing in a parking lot. He is flipping through his wallet. He pulls out a giant wad of money.

Hello, my name is Rich Storrs. I am the wealthiest free agent in this profession, and the most talented. I am coming soon, and you people, ha. You people better get ready to pay.

Rich makes his way from the parking lot, into the bank. He hands the money to the bank teller.

You see, when you are the wealthiest free agent, you can afford to do whatever you want. That is why I am coming here. I have wrestled in several federations, as well as Japan. And I here that if I want some real competition, I should come here. So brace yourself. My name is Rich Storrs.

[Dean]

For your very first promo ever, I suppose it wasn't all THAT bad. But you've got a loooooooooooong way to go. I mean, miles... I mean... over the horizon, buddy. Just look toward the horizon and start walking.

Read some promos from Ice Cold, Zio The Abyss, White Zombie, Kilroy, Dr. Faust, JoetheShow, and myself.

Also, if you have any programs to check spelling and grammar, like Microsoft Word, I suggest using them.

[XZ]

you know..you should do a more detailed vignette, atleast make his presence felt here..
But meh, not bad.

[$ean]

it was my first one. I tried. I'm working on my next one, so hopefully it will be better.