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Stephen Lynch
September 28th, 2006, 07:15 PM
A cameraman walks up on Adam Pugh in the hall. He has a brush and palette in his hands, he paints for a while, then starts to talk.


Adam Pugh
Matthew Voltaire…At Revival you got one taste of me, but one painting does not delve into the true soul of an artist. Tyler Hart surprised us all, and that will be one thing I shall never allow to happen again. After all, many artist have had setbacks, only being recognized after their deaths.

He stops, squirts some more paint onto the palette, starts to paint again, and starts talking once more.

There is no doubt in the world of Da Vinci or Michelangelo as to just what the artist means. But we are leaving in the days of modern art. Modern Art leaves people wondering, it always questions the confines of reality. An artist can bend the colors to fit their reality, and I shall do the same in that ring. Mattycakes, I don’t care about you, You can’t even finish your thoughts, let alone the match that I shall take to you.

He stops, looks as if the mural is missing something, scratches his chin with the end of the brush then begins talking and painting again.

You and I both have loosing records, and that is something Adam Pugh can’t stand or justify: a loosing record. As an artist I need to achieve perfection in the works of art that flow from the tip of my brush, and tonight, my paint shall be your blood. With that paint I shall make the best declaration of Adam Pugh on the blank canvas fate has placed before me.

Pauses again, this time adds his initials before setting down his equipment, and turning towards the camera..

Just as art has no boundries, neither does Adam Pugh.

Adam stares at the camera, then turns around to look at his work, before entering the locker-room to get changed.

OOC: Short, to the point, little more developement, thanks to Joe for the new phrase.

Dean
September 28th, 2006, 07:18 PM
Aside from messing up the tag, I thought this was pretty good. If anything brought it down, it'd be the spelling overall and the second paragraph. I just felt paragraph two had a weird structure to it that didn't flow with the rest of the promo.

"The match I shall take to you" was a weird way to express it, and using "Mattycakes" really broke the flow of the promo for me, personally, as I was reading it. I thought the character was a bit more mature when it came to dialogue than to use "Mattycakes."

But, I really liked the promo, and I like Adam Pugh a lot. He's a great character, and I'm glad you're sticking with it, as I think you're making some vast improvement in a very short period of time. :)

Stephen Lynch
September 28th, 2006, 07:24 PM
Yeah, I noticed the tag, fixed it. He said Mattycakes because I see him as the kind of guy who if he repects you, uses proper dialact, real sufistacated, but if he doesn't, he will do and say whatever he can to degrade him. Still coming along, but I decided on that much of the character at least :shrug: