To the PWW fans

[MR. KENNEDY 101]

They have a camera backstage with Lil Finga wanting to say something


Lil Finga:
Hey whats up all of yall in watchin me right here right now in the greatest town ever Philadelphia. Okay most of you if not all of you already know if got a match with this guy he goes by the name Xavier Crawford and hopefully he brings his girl Erica O'Day with him, damn that girl is fine and i know everyone here agrees with me. But ummm yea lets get back to the match yea, this Xavier Crawford dude ive never heard of him i have no clue what to expect when i get into the ring with him for all i know he could come come out with come crazy ass move no one has ever seen or heard of before, but hey im not gonna judge this guy before i see him. Im not gonna come out here sayin, "Omg this guy is new and he has no clue what hes getting into he better leave the company before he gets with me" or something like that ya know. All im gonna say is hey i hope me and him can put on the best match possible for all of you people here in Philli.
But i bet all of you are wondering what ive been up to since World Hardcore Wrestling went out of buissness. Well ive been training harder, getting better, and getting more vicious and more hungry than i was in WHW. So for anyone else who wants a title since no one knows yet what these titles are gonna be whether the are all single titles or if they put in a tag team title or those tornado tag titles with the 4 way matches where the last two remaining get the title or whatever they have it doesnt matter im gonna get atleast one title if this fed lasts longer than WHW. This place has a better atmosphere in here and theres just something telling me this will end up being the most sucessful federation ever Pro Wrestling Warriors 4 Life, Peace Out everyone

and the camera fades away and the promo comes to an end


ok, personally i dont know what to think of this one, i think there are some good parts and some bad ones, but i figured its better to do a alright one than none at all. Comments are welcome

[Dean]

It is better to do an alright promo than none at all. But all bias aside, this wasn't alright.

Your grammar is terrible. You used "OMG" instead of "Oh, my God!" The whole promo just... with no offense... sucked.

['Dre]

What's this dude's gimmick?

[MR. KENNEDY 101]

i honestly dont know what his gimmick is, if i had to pick something it would probably just be like a gangster gimmick or maybe like a John Cena on RAW where he doesnt use the brass knucks or chains or stuff like that, i really should get one gimmick just to keep in his promos

[White Zombie]

I don't even know where to begin with this one. I don't understand the name of the guy, it's just plain retarded. The gimmick is weak and played out. The promo was simply unnecessary, as you covered no new ground or anything. Use some formating, don't make everything blue, the Shift button is not something to be feared so maybe hit it once in awhile.

This is really a poor man's John Cena kind of effort and I don't think anyone likes John Cena promos, so the hate towards this is quite transitive.

[Dr. Acula]

This promo was bland and typical. The next time you type up a promo, leave the internet slang out of it.

[MR. KENNEDY 101]

Hey, could some people tell me some promos they personally like alot from a wrestler, probably someone whos a face though, so I could kinda study it or something?

[Dean]

It wouldn't really work. Your character is pretty originally crappy.

Face rappers who act like faces are... generally sh*tty. Unless you're Ron Killings. Somehow, he pulls it off, but he has his share of people saying he sucks and sh*t. Killings is good in the ring, though. If it weren't for that, he wouldn't be all that popular.

But yeah, improve your grammar and take into consideration the observations and suggestions posted here. Try using Microsoft Word or some program with spell check.

[JoetheShow]

My AIM is Conrad4heisman, contact me if you'd like and I'll give you all the advice I can.

['Dre]

My character's got the "gangsta" gimmick, but, I dont even know what disposition he is...

I had him as a heel, but Joe turned him face on me. I can track down some of his promos if you need.

[XZ]

Hm...actually, you readin Dre..GillT's promos should help you, seeing how he has the thing nailed down.

But yeah, you need to work on your language..and don't just continue ranting on about your opponents. Get creative. And always make your promos detailed..like describe how they start...details about Lil Finga
And thats coming from me, a pretty bad, ..average at best, promo'er.