gaaras pokedex (b)

[gaara33]

name gaara
age 13
sex m
Pokemon: mankey (lvl 5)
Money: $500
Items: Pokeball x3, Potions x2, Antidote x2

i walde like to start in villige with the egg hunt and i would like to buy a egg but i just got my pokemon. but befor im out side it trying to trane on stuff

[Mr. Blue!]

Please remove everything that's listed below your items, and tell me where you wish to start.

[gaara33]

i walde like to start in villige with the egg hunt and i would like to buy a egg.but befor im out side it trying to trane on stuff

[Mr. Blue!]

No, tell me where you would like to start, as in Hoenn, Kanto, or Johto. You can buy eggs any time. Go read some other pokedexes to get a feel for this.

Also, try picking up an english book... I can hardly read your posts.

[gaara33]

ok ill start in hoenn

oh and i want to but thae say im spaming

[Mr. Blue!]

That's because you didn't have a pokedex when you posted in there. And your first egg is free. Beginning to be editted in.

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The day has finally come! You can finally live your dream of becoming a pokemon trainer. You have your head up high with your Seviper in your pokeball your parents gave you. You are about to open the door to Prof. Birch's labratory when...

BANG!

The door slams into your face and you fall flat on your face. When you open your eyes, you see a young girl around your age helping you up.

Girl: I'm sorry....I didn't see you coming.
You: That's okay. It was an accident.
Girl: I'm just so excited! I got my first pokemon today!
You: Cool..I have a *pokemon* I'm going to go see Prof. Birch to get my pokedex
Girl: Cool. Oh yeah, my name is May. Nice to meet you. Wanna have a battle before you get your pokedex?
You: Sure. My name is Gaara. GO Mankey!
May: GO Natu!

Your pokemon are sent out just as you hear an explosion come from Prof. Birch's labratory.

Prof. Birch: GET BACK HERE WITH THOSE POKEBALLS!
Person: Cya sucker. Remember this name "TEAM MAGMA"
Prof. Birch: MAY! Gaara! I'm glad you are here! Go retrieve those pokeballs and come back.

Team Magma member stops and laughs.

May: Okay Prof.
You: Okay. Let's go May.
Magma Member: Okay kiddies..2-on-2 battle! Go Numel and Poochyena!"

[gaara33]

go mankey mankey do a takal

then hang on a pole the do back with a tale wage then jump buck down then scratch him do that to poochena

and ps can i get a egg now

[Mr. Blue!]

You can get an egg any time.

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Mankey looks dumbfounded at the targetless command and just tries to spin around a pole to get Poochyena. Poochyena dodges the attack and Mankey crashes into the ground. Meanwhile Natu runs scared being chased by Numel.

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Control both pokemon AND USE PROPER GRAMMAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! If you need go look in a dictionary for correct spellings. I'm sorry to be mean, but I can barely read your posts.

[gaara33]

no thanks i dont want to be in this now

[Mr. Blue!]

Okay... I didn't mean to be mean, but when I can barely read some of the stuff it drives me nuts.

*Requesting closure*