Updater Competion: TheTealJaguar

[Alice!]

Gecko: All right! I'm finally ready to start my pokemon adventure. C'mon Farfetch'd, let's go find us a trainer to take down.

[TheTealJaguar]

After saying farewell to your mom you set out on your adventure. You start to get bored after walking for twenty minutes and not seeing a single trainer.

You close your eyes and imagine you, and Farfetch'd working together in a battle. "ouch!"

You tripped over an Elecktrike!
"Hey stay away from my pokemon!" A young, female guitarist runs up to you
"Your gonna pay for that, go Elecktrike!"
A: Send out a Pokemon
S: Run away amd scream like a little girl

[Alice!]

Gecko: Hey, hey, calm down. It was just an accident. Now then, if you want a civil battle, I'll take you on, but if you're just going to yell at me I'll have to be on my way.

[TheTealJaguar]

The girl takes a long sigh and seemingly calms down.
"Alright, I'll calm down and battle you all respectable like. And, to be an even better opponent, I shall give you the honor to go first."

[Alice!]

Gecko: Now now, that seems a titch like restrained hostility. Tell you what, your pokemon can have the first strike...if it can earn it of course. Go Farfetch'd! Use a Sand-Attack to blind that Electrike.

[TheTealJaguar]

Farfetch'd leaps towards Elecktrike, who does not know what is coming, because he does not know that the battle has started.
" Elecktrike, look out!"

Elecktrike snaps out of his mindless daze, but not in time. As he detects the oncoming Farfecth'd, sand sprays in it's eyes. Elecktricke yelps in pain, and Farfetch'd sees his oppurtunity, launches himself at Electrike, causing critical damge.

[Alice!]

Gecko: Sorry about that, you really should work on you Trike's reaction time. Farfetch'd, use a double Steel Wing attack to make an Electrike sandwich!

[TheTealJaguar]

Farfetch'd goes in for the attack, and just as its wing makes contact with Elecktrike, Elecktrikes eyes turn white. White stars spray from it's mouth and both pokemon fall.
Guitarist; My pokemon knows an egg move too, swift.

Both pokemon recover and Elecktrike charges at Farfetch'd, who flaps it's wings and gets only a few of the ground. Still, this is enough to fly over the oncoming Elecktrike.

[Alice!]

Gecko: Farfetch'd, get your head in the game! Hang back and wait for it to use Swift again, then block them with your Steel Wing attack. After that, rush in and hit it with your still steeled wings.

[TheTealJaguar]

Farfetch'd waits for Elecktrike to use Swift again but Elecktrike is instructed by his trainer to wait for Farfethch'd to attack. After about a minute Elecktrike gets impatient and charges at Farfetch'd. He jumps into the air for a tackle and connects with Farfetch'd's steel wing. Unfortunatley for Farfetch'd, Elecktrike's static ability paralyzes him. Despite the paralisis, Farfetch'd is able to hit the already-down Elecktrike for a great deal of damage.

[Alice!]

Gecko: Now Farfetch'd! Use Steel Wing to come down on Electrike's head, driving it into the ground. Power attack go!

[TheTealJaguar]

Farfetch'd trys to hit Elecktrike with steel wing again but beacuse it's paralisis, Farfetch'd is only able to make it's wing steel. Up comes Elecktrike grabs hold of Farfecth'd in his mouth, and uses swift attack, which launches Farfecth'd at a nearby tree.

[Alice!]

Gecko: Fight back Farfetch'd! Use Steel Wing as fast as you can, before you get paralysed again. Take this thing out as fast as you can, time is against us!

[TheTealJaguar]

Farfetch'd gets up and brushes itself off. Then as it is charging at Elecktrike, it is able to make a Elecktrike sandwich with a double steel wing. Elecktrike gets badly injured and has some bloody cuts on it, and it is lying on the ground though it still has enough energy left.

[Alice!]

Gecko: Farfecth'd, use Sand Attack to hide your presence, then cut through it without getting blinded thatnks to your Keen Eye. Hit Electrike on the underside with a precisely place Peck attack.

[TheTealJaguar]

Farfetch'd started flapping it wings and as a result produced a cloud of sand. Elecktrike seemed to be confused as to where Farfetch'd had went. Farfetch'd charged out of the dust cloud and hit Elecktrike near the kidneys. Elecktrike started to bleed from it's wound, making clear that it had been hurt critically

Finish Elecktrike

[Alice!]

Gecko: Eew. I hate the sight of blood. Farfetch'd, finish this guy off swiftly and neatly with a Steel Wing attack to the head. Just don't hit too hard, we don'y want to be killing any pokemon in our second battle.

[TheTealJaguar]

Farfetch'd goes in to hit Elecktrike with Steel Wing, but before he can even hit him, Elecktrike faints!

Level Up for Farfetch'd!

The trainer runs off with Elecktrike crying, and drops $200.

A: Go in search for more trainers
Q:Look for wild pokemon
D: Go back to talk with your Mom and/or the prof.
E:Continue down the path

[Alice!]

Gecko: G'job Farfetch'd. You're totally the coolest mon in the world. Let's go get you some new buddies to hang out with. Let's get some wild pokemon!

Farfetch'd: Fetch etch! *salutes with stick*

[TheTealJaguar]

You and Farfrtch'd walk along the bush-lined trail, searching for pokemon. When Farfetch'd looks in one bush, he gets startled and jumps back. A male Nidoran runs out bearing his fangs.

What are you gonna do?

[Alice!]

Gecko: Aha! Farfetch'd, you wasted his chance for a free shot, and he's not getting any more. Hit it with a Sand-Attack, then run in with Peck.

[TheTealJaguar]

Farfetch'd kicks up sand which hits Nidoran in the eyes. As Farfetch'd comes in with peck, Nidoran and Faretch'd hit each other with peck simultaneously.

Farfetch'd backs up to dodge an oncoming net that swallows the Nidoran. He is hoisted up to a larger net containing a Cubone, Geodude, and a Spoink.

This was held by a large blimp with a red "r" on it?

What next?

[Alice!]

Gecko: Farfetch'd, use Steel Wing and fly up to slice open that net. Time is of the essence, so move swiftly!

[TheTealJaguar]

Farfetch'd flys up and slices open the balloon easily, and is able to open the net, freeing the pokemon.

The
Cubone
Nidoran-m
Spoink
and Geodude
Fall infront of you and appear grateful.

What next?

A:Try to catch one
E: Try to fight one
D: Walk away
F: Other

[Alice!]

G: End the thread.

The 25 post mark has been met, and your updater competition is over. I'll save my comments for the judging, but thanks for taking the time to do this.

The thread will remain open for 24 hours for questions and comments.

[TheTealJaguar]

I thought it was done? Do I need to continue?

[Alice!]

Nope. My bad, I thought you were without actually checking in here.

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