intro/deck observations

[Okagiryu]

hullo every one..i am new at this...although i am not new at my game:bow:
i am 15 yrs old here in the state of washington...but enough about me lets talk about my deck. feel free to add suggestions

zombie deck:

tributes: 4
Vampire lord
Despair from the dark x2
Ryu kokki

4 and below: 13
fear from the dark x2
pyramid turtle x3
spirit reaper x3
sangan
dd warior lady
reflect bouder
slate warrior
injection fairy lilly

spells:20
book of life x3
premature burial
wicked breaking flamberge baou
book of moon
swords of revealing light
nobleman of extermination x2
mystical space typhoon
giant trunade
heavy storm
brain control
snatch steal
soul release*
pot of avarice
soul exchange*
scapegoat*
lightning vortex
graceful charity

traps: 5
mirror force
magical cylinder
judgment of anubis
torrential tribute
call of the haunted
* optionals....becuz of the ban list

in 2 hrs i will post my other deck. so...please take time to leave any of ur comments or opinions. :D

[OkyoShampoo]

-Fear From The Darkx2
+Vampire Lord
+Magician of Faithx2
+Breaker the Magical Warrior
+Treeborn Frog

-Wicked Breaking Flamberge Baou
-Book of Moon
-Nobleman of Exterminationx2
-Giant Trunade
-Soul Release
-Soul Exchange
-Lightning Vortex(preference)
-Swords/Goats(pick one)
-Pot of Avarice
-brain control
+Smashing Groundx2
+Nobleman of Crossoutx2
+Monster Reincarnation(great combo with Treeborn and V-Lord)

-judgment of anubis
+Dust Tornado
+Sakuretsu Armorx2
+Bottomless Trap Hole