Updater Competion: Mr. Blue (SneaselMaster)

[Alice!]

Gecko: All right! I'm finally ready to start my pokemon adventure. C'mon Farfetch'd, let's go find us a trainer to take down.

[Mr. Blue!]

I'm glad you're doing this, but would you mind doing me a few favors?
1) Tell me where you want to start, and
2) Please put a bio (see examples in the registration), also
3) Tell me if you want RPG or stats style. Oh,and
4) Send me 5 dollars (American currency).

[Alice!]

Well...bonus points for making sure everything is clarified, but did you read the whole "Read me now!" thread? Careful examination answers all of your questions.

1) Where is a constuct that doesn't have to be designated here. The whole of this should take place in the field, and the pokemon a trainer would have has nothing to do with the region he is found in.

2) How is that necessary? Any sort of a bio beyond what pokemon you have has never been necessary here, and certainly not just for a sample thread.

3) Scoring component 3 is RP skills, hence an RP style would be appropriate. Oh, and

4) You wish.

[Mr. Blue!]

Yeah, I read it...after I posted.

Gecko and Farfetch'd start away from Pallet Town. You eventually come across a group of trainers huddled around a battle. You run up to see a man dressed in black beating the crap out of a kid's Pikachu. His Geodude finally smacks the electric mouse square in the face leaving it KOed. What do you do?

A) Battle the trainer.
B) See if there is any way you can help the poor kid.
C) Just stand by and watch.
Z) Leave.

[Alice!]

Hehe. Way to look at things in the right order.

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Gecko: *thinking* Well that doesn't seem right. Geodude has a massive type advantage. Of course he would against Farfetch'd as well. Unles of course...oh right! Steel beats Rock! *aloud* Hey, what's going on here?

[Mr. Blue!]

"You got a problem kid?" sneers the man in black.
"Yeah, why are you picking on this little kid?" you answer.
"Why should I tell you?"

Why should he?

a) Because you think you can whoop him with Farfetch'd?
b) Because picking on kids is wrong?
c) Oh, nevermind. You don't want to get involved.

[Alice!]

Gecko: Well. *readys pokeball* I've got a problem with people who pick on little kids. You think you and your Geodude are so tough. I wonder. How would you deal with someone actually at your level?

[Mr. Blue!]

"Fine. I could use a little practice, if you can call kicking this little dodo's butt practice."
Both pokemon are brought out and the battle begins.
Geodude immediately goes for a punch in the bird's beak, but the bird jumps over him and whacks him on the head with his stick. Farfetch'd tries to take off, but Geodude then grabs his tail feathers...


I'm back. We kicked ass in the Latin Convention. No one came close to us, and I might be going to Nationals in Chicago!

[Alice!]

Gecko: Oh come now Farfetch'd, I know you're better than that. Smack that rock upside the head with your Steel Wing attack, then fly out of its reach and try to dodge any attacks it throws iat you.

[Mr. Blue!]

Farfetch'd spins around as the wing not holding its stick begins to glow. It smacks Geodude square on the forehead, delivering enough damage to have him release his grip. Farfetch'd flys high into the air, dodging the flying rocks Geodude is sending at him. Geodude then curls its self up into Defense Curl, taking advantage of the bird's fleeing flight.

[Alice!]

Gecko: Alright Farfetch'd, time to break through this fleet. All aerial units report. Throw your stick at Geodude to distract it, then launch yourself in a spiral dive-bomb towards Geodude, and don't forget to use Steel Wing. If you don't, you're liable to break something.

[Mr. Blue!]

Farfetch'd's stick spirals towards Geodude as Farfetch'd's wing begins to glow. The stick harmlessly bounces off the defensed Geodude, but it is enough for him to break away from his posture. He looks up to see the bird dive bombing towards him and immediately goes back into position, just in time for the impact. Farfetch'd strikes the rock head with its silvery wing. He drops to the ground, landing on its small talons squawking in pain from its aching wing, as Geodude goes in circles clutching its throbbing forehead.

[Alice!]

Gecko: Ouch, that's gotta hurt. C'mon Farfetch'd, just regain equilibrium first and thwack Geodude a couple times with your Steel Wing attack.

[Mr. Blue!]

As Farfetch'd wing began to glow again Geodude stopped running and picked Farfetch'd's stick up off the ground. Farfetch'd runs towards Geodude about to smack him when he smacks Farfetch'd across the face with his own stick. Farfetch'd trips and falls from the attack. Geodude throws the stick hard at the bird, but it falls harmlessly next to the bird due to Geodude's bad aim.

"Not so tough now, are ya?" sneers the guy in black. "Geodude, tackle the dodo and put it out of its misery."

[Alice!]

Gecko: That's all right Farfetch'd. He was a fool to give that back to you. Take your stick and wait for its Tackle attack, then hit it hard with Steel Wing to counter its attack. THen kick up a Sand-Attack and fly back.

[Mr. Blue!]

Geodude flies toward Farfetch'd. He grabs his stick and does a flip over him, wing glowing. Farfetch'd smacks the Geodude with the Stick in wing. *CRITICAL HIT* Farfetch'd begins beating its wings, causing dust to fly, as it takes off. Geodude, frustrated, attempts to throw rocks at Farfetch'd.


Finish Geodude

[Alice!]

Gecko: All right Farfetch'd, Steel Wing those rocks away, then smack him with Steel Wing once more!

[Mr. Blue!]

Farfetch'd plays baseball with the rocks and his Stick, and then swoops in at Geodude for the final Steel Wing. Once again he uses his stick wing and delivers a critical hit.


Level Up Farfetch'd
Gain $200

The guy in black recalls his Geodude and runs off, fighting back tears, throwing back a crumpled up $200....

"Thanks," says the kid. "He was really being mean to me and Pikachu. You mind if I come with you, just in case some other jerk bugs me?"

A: Sure, why not?
B: Buzz off kid. I battled him for the money and training.

[Alice!]

Gecko: Sure, why not? You got any other pokemon on you? It'll be pretty tough to get anywhere if your only pokemon is unable to fight.

[Mr. Blue!]

"Thank you so much," says the kid. "These are my pokemon."
As he says that he releases to pokemon from their respective balls.
"This is Pikachu, who you saw earlier, and my Sandshrew. I'm Sam."

Sam has joined with you.
Pokemon:
Pikachu Lv. 6 Male Ability: Static
1)Thundershock 2)Growl 3)Tail Whip
Sandshrew Lv. 6 Female Ability: Sand Veil
1)Scratch 2)Defense Curl

"So, where are we going?" asks Sam.

A) To the town up ahead.
B) To find some wild pokemon.
W) To find some trainers.

[Alice!]

Gecko: Well all right then, glad to have you around. Though neither of us really has a lot of pokemon.... Hey, what say you we go find some wild pokemon to catch?

[Mr. Blue!]

"That sounds great," says Sam. "My dad gave me 5 pokeballs and a couple of potions to go catch pokemon... That's how I just got Pikachu. So right now I have three pokeballs to burn."

Sam uses a potion on his Pikachu and you two head out into the wilderness beyond.

After nearly an hour of searching you still turn up empty handed. You two sit to rest near a small pond.

What are you going to do next?

A: Keep searching.
V: Go for a swim.


OOC: How long is the competition going to last? I'm getting pretty excitd at who's gonna be the next updaters.

[Alice!]

Gecko: Uggh. You'd think there'd be something around here. Whatever, I could use a break. Me an' Farfetch'd are gonna go for a swim. What about you?

Sam: I can keep going for a bit. I'll go off to try to find something and meet up with you later.

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The competition will last until everyone either reaches 25 posts or gets DQed for inactivity. I'm pretty sure you'll be the first one done.

[Mr. Blue!]

Is there bonus points for finishing first??? lol.

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Sam trots off down the path as you throw off your shirt and dive into the water, Farfetch'd following. After splashing around for a bit you start to notice something scraping against your skin. You look around and realize that the pond is full of Carvahnas! What will you do?

W: Yikes, I'm outta here!
T: Who cares, let's just swim!
3: Let's get one.

[Alice!]

Eeps! Carvanha! I'd like to see how this turns out, but your time is up. You did an excellent job, and your judging will be posted at the same time as everyone else's. Also, finishing first will be taken into consideration with the "Brevity" category.

Comment and talk for 24 hours, because after that this thread will be closed.

[Mr. Blue!]

w00t w00t! I'm all done!

First of all I'd like to thank the academy, and *is shot*


Thanks Linux. When is the deadline for having 25 replies?

[Alice!]

Ermmh, I'll probably just cut off the last couple people when I feel like it, or if they start lagging. With the appropriate penalty of course. Anyway, good job on finishing quickly, as well as being a good updater.

THREAD CLOSED