RP thread for the omega warriors

[Adriel]

Okay everyone this is the First RP I've ever done so let's make it good.

Ruins. Shiven past the ancient rubble. This was once his home from the year 2000, bustling with cell phone conversations, speeding cars, buildings, and people. Now only the rubble and the occasional gusts of wind rolled through the town. He recalled how it was destroyed. An ancestor of Rill Farrend led a terrorist attack, bringing the helpless town down. His father also died in this attack, but was tortured before then~

Shiven: *clenching fist* Father. I will avenge you...

~He continued through the ruins. He saw an occasional shade (another word for ghost) or two, but he was not affected. His destination was Hanging Rock, a place where he would seldom not play at a millenium ago. As he reached the former city limits, a man stopped him.~

???: You. Give me yer loot.
Shiven: I do not have money to begin with.
???: Wrong answer.

~The man pulled out a sword, and Shiven readied his daggers~

???: You think those toothpicks can stop me?
Shiven: Let me say this. I'm a contract assassin.
???: Wha?

~With one swift charge, Shiven ended up behind the man. The bandit stood there, wide-eyed in disbelief, and he fell to the ground. Shiven had little reason to suspect that he was a true enemy, but continued on to Hanging Rock~

[Adriel]

He continued his journey to hanging rock He walked carefully through the ruins and occasionally saw shadows, Then he came to an open area where he suspected that he would be attacked. But even as his very soul was screaming for him to go back he continued on. Then from out of nowhere a man jumped out and tried to attack him.

???: Well I see you beat my friend.
Adriel: yes, Quite easily actually.
???: well you won't get me that easily.
Adriell: we'll see about that
Adriel charges at the man he moves out of the way but adriel was expecting this. He turned around and plunged his sword deep into his heart.
Adriel: well beat that.

Adriel walks farther. But then all of the sudden he falls off the edge of a cliff, He grabs on to the ledge with one hand, He begins to slip~

[Newbie7.07]

Wow, this rp is really inactive. I guess it gives people time to work themselves into the plot, though.
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Adriel looked doomed. Hanging onto a cliff with only one hand, and the other hand slipping off, all seemed lost for him. And it would have been the end if someone had not helped him up. As Adriel's hand was about to slip off, someone grabbed hold of his hand and pulled him up. He was wearing white armor, and for weapons he had a rapier, a halberd and a large bow. Behind him was a giant bird, eight feet tall, and if it had been holding it's wings out, it would have been at least thirty feet across. As soon as Adriel was back on his feet, a band of robbers attacked. With both warriors there the robbers were slayed in a few seconds.
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Terrible, but nothing very interesting has happened for me to build on so far. And, I had to make the equivilent of a profile.

[smashbro14]

is inactive because its not where its supposed to be. its supposed to be in the training thread. this subforum is for bios.

[Newbie7.07]

Oh. Should I post my bio here, then?

[Adriel]

You know I think I will make A bio.